Joy was right to follow the rules even though it hurt and might not have mattered, and just as right to rage at the people who made and broke them.
Some odd pacing, especially the “oh the villainous plan didn’t work it’s fine” bit. But wouldn’t have wanted to lose the lovely little section with Anita to get more there.
Mr. Benn’s Any Era Clothes!
Mr. Benn’s Any Era Clothes!
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